Perhaps it's the early hour. But this made me laugh out loud:
What's the difference between "eligible employees" and "employees eligible to participate"? Only an unnecessary sort of zeal, as if those who cannot participate are strictly forbidden to try.
From Michael Leddy's How to improve writing (no. 1 in a series).
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